😀My Writing throughout the Terms😀
Hey guys Ashrita here with another post. Today I am going to show you guys how my writing improved in the past three terms.
This is my writing at the start of the year.
Here is how I write now!
Oh here's a sneak peek of my own story I'm writing!
It all started when the Queen and King had their first child, “IT’S A GIRL!” everyone shouted! So on the news spreaded to the rest of the village then town to town also island to island! Everyone celebrate with some grape juice and something that made them a little tipsy...They would dance they would cheer with big smiles on their face. “What should we name her”.....
My focus was to write more formal but still have some comedy.
Oh here's a sneak peek of my own story I'm writing!
It all started when the Queen and King had their first child, “IT’S A GIRL!” everyone shouted! So on the news spreaded to the rest of the village then town to town also island to island! Everyone celebrate with some grape juice and something that made them a little tipsy...They would dance they would cheer with big smiles on their face. “What should we name her”.....
My focus was to write more formal but still have some comedy.
I can see that I have improved a lot with descriptive writing then in term one.
